Metadata
| Status | done |
|---|---|
| Assigned | agent-101 |
| Agent identity | 3184716484e6f0ea08bb13539daf07686ee79d440505f1fdf2de0357707034c3 |
| Created | 2026-05-01T22:09:37.114984380+00:00 |
| Started | 2026-05-01T22:12:17.701815693+00:00 |
| Completed | 2026-05-01T22:17:51.479168352+00:00 |
| Tags | grant,urgent,review,v3,reviewer, eval-scheduled |
| Eval score | 0.74 |
| └ blocking impact | 0.93 |
| └ completeness | 0.90 |
| └ constraint fidelity | 0.70 |
| └ coordination overhead | 0.91 |
| └ correctness | 0.86 |
| └ downstream usability | 0.87 |
| └ efficiency | 0.82 |
| └ intent fidelity | 0.71 |
| └ style adherence | 0.95 |
Description
Description
You are reviewing workgraph_google_application_FINAL_v3.md from a HOSTILE posture. You are a Google.org program officer who must cut 95%+ of the stack. You are tired. You have seen too many infrastructure proposals that promised reliability, auditability, and adoption, and delivered software nobody used. You are looking for reasons to discount this proposal and move on.
You are NOT a contrarian for its own sake. Your goal is to find the actual weaknesses — the places where the application overclaims, hedges, drifts, or invokes credibility it hasn't earned. If v3 survives this pass, it's stronger.
What to read
workgraph_google_application_FINAL_v3.mdat commit70c8e7fon worktree branchwg/agent-77/v3-assemble-stitch. Usegit show 70c8e7f:workgraph_google_application_FINAL_v3.md.workgraph_google_application_FINAL_v2.md— for comparison~/poietic.life/notes/v3-spine-brief.md— intent~/poietic.life/notes/v3-link-verification-20260501.md— IF it exists by the time you read inputs. If not, note in your review.CLAUDE.mdfor project context
What to write
Output: ~/poietic.life/notes/v3-review-skeptical-20260501.md — under 800 words.
Structure:
- Headline (one sentence): your gut reaction reading v3.
- Overclaim hunt. Quote specific phrases where v3 promises more than 36 months can deliver.
- Vague-claim hunt. Quote phrases that sound important but don't commit to anything verifiable.
- The 'where's the science deliverable' attack. Has §30 actually answered this objection or just acknowledged it? Be ruthless.
- Authority gaps. Where do founder track records get invoked but not tied to the proposed work?
- Internal inconsistencies. Do §17, §26, §29 tell the same story? Where do they drift?
- Liverpool overlap risk. Does §28 land 'complementary' or accidentally invite a 'didn't we just fund this' read?
- Three sections you'd cut from your shortlist over. Specific.
- Where would you need to see evidence to be convinced? What's missing.
Constraints
- Real critique, not performative cynicism. If a section is genuinely strong, don't manufacture a complaint about it.
- No em-dashes. No PI language.
- Quote actual phrases from v3 to ground your attacks.
- Under 800 words.
Validation
- All inputs read
- Specific quoted overclaims and vague claims identified
- §30 'where's the science' mitigation evaluated honestly
- Liverpool overlap addressed
- Three cut-shortlist sections named
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Output at
~/poietic.life/notes/v3-review-skeptical-YYYYMMDD.md - Under 800 words
Depends on
Required by
Log
- 2026-05-01T22:09:37.112943498+00:00 Task paused
- 2026-05-01T22:10:54.313261473+00:00 Task published
- 2026-05-01T22:12:17.701819140+00:00 Spawned by coordinator --executor claude --model opus
- 2026-05-01T22:12:26.894819205+00:00 Starting skeptical review of v3 application. Reading inputs.
- 2026-05-01T22:14:28.794510990+00:00 Read v3 (366 lines) and v2 (360 lines) for diff. v3-link-verification file does not exist yet. Drafting review.
- 2026-05-01T22:17:16.413868608+00:00 Validated: under 800 words (798), no em-dashes, no PI language, all sections present (headline, overclaim, vague, science attack, authority, inconsistency, Liverpool, three cuts, evidence). Output at ~/poietic.life/notes/v3-review-skeptical-20260501.md.
- 2026-05-01T22:17:43.561213365+00:00 Committed locally: 80b3925 in poietic.life. NOT pushed: branch diverged with peer work; downstream synthesis reads from disk.
- 2026-05-01T22:17:51.479175345+00:00 Task pending eval (agent reported done; awaiting `.evaluate-*` to score)
- 2026-05-01T22:20:17.211734741+00:00 PendingEval → Done (evaluator passed; downstream unblocks)